I love the weekly prompts at Mama Kat’s Writer’s Workshop but got so caught up in yesterday’s post that I missed them.
When I saw the prompt to write a 6 word memoir of a significant time in your life I knew mine instantly.
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“Would you like to hold her?”
I have heard this question three times:
As my oldest daughter took her first breaths in the world.
As my youngest daughter took her last.
And as my middle daughter was finally removed from her ventilator, to breathe on her own.
Reminding me to exhale.
And hold on.
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Jennifer says
Incredible what you have survived and even more meaningful is how you’ve been able to continue to love and love more.
Z says
I’m new to your blog, and every post I’ve read so far has made me want to cry. This one just pushed me over the edge… crying <3 You are an amazing, strong woman and as many times as you've heard this before, you really do have a way with words.
Jessica says
Thank you so much for spending time here and reading my posts. I am sorry about the tears but truly appreciate you taking the time to read.
Cheryl @ Mommypants says
Sorry I’m so late getting over here, but I wanted to tell you how beautiful and perfect this is. xo
Jessica says
Thank you Cheryl, that means so much coming from you.
Rachel {at} Mommy Needs a Vacation says
This is beautiful. My favorite of all the 6 word memoirs.
Jessica says
Really? Thank you!!!
Yuliya says
You never cease to make me think, pause and appreciate life. (You also never cease to amaze me)
Jessica says
Awww, thank you so much Yuliya.
wendy says
Beautiful and powerful.
Nana says
Even though I was “warned” not to read your six words…I had to. They are wonderful, they are painful, they are hopeful. And yes, yes, yes, I am crying.
Kate says
WOW! This is absolutely beautiful. And it’s so true, such a simple yet powerful question.
julie gardner says
Yes to the goosebumps. To the tears. To no breath.
Just beautiful. What a tribute to your loves.
So very special.
rusti says
took my breath, brought me to tears, gave me chills… thank you for sharing. *hugs*
Barbara says
This was absolutely beautiful!
Wendy says
Very touching and heartwrenching. I waited for the very same words with my first born.
Candace@drinksanddiapers says
I have heard rhose words also! Very moving!
Tim@sogeshirts says
Heart warming and heart breaking. I can’t believe six words and a few sentences after could trigger such emotion in me but it did.
Jessica says
Thanks so much Tim.
Mimzy Wimzy says
Absolute perfection.
Amy says
Wow. Such a moving sentence. What a lovely picture.
Sara @ Periwinkle Papillon says
my favorite 6 word post. beautiful.
January says
Touching, beautiful, haunting. I have goosebumps from head to toe.
Tonya says
I am once again left speechless by your words.
What profound moments.
xoxo
Kim says
This took my breath away. You’ve painted a moment that spans eternity in just six words. I think we’re all exhaling after reading this. Beautiful!
Natalie says
Beautiful. Who knew 6 words could mean so much?
Alexandra says
Isn’t it wondrous how less is better?
I have always felt that.
Makes me think of the Mark Twain quote, “If I’d had more time, I’d have written you a shorter letter.”
Jessica says
Perfect quote. Maybe I should start 6 word blog posts.
D says
I love your words.
krista says
chills. i have chills. so beautiful & heartbreaking.
Tayarra says
Powerful for sure. What a meaningful picture.
Stephanie says
So much meaning in such a short sentence! Beautifully done.
Leighann says
Jessica.
I have no words.
I am speachless.
xoxo
Nichole says
Truly beautiful, Jessica.
Perfect words…just perfect.
blueviolet @ A Nut in a Nutshell says
What can a comment even say? Wow.
MommaKiss says
simply brilliant. that’s all I can say to you.
Runnermom-jen says
Oh, I loved this…so much said in just 6 little words! You’re an amazing lady 🙂
Lisa says
I seriously well up every time I read you. You write so beautifully, and I am so so sorry again, for your terrible loss.
Kimberly says
Crying.. For you, for her.
Samantha says
Sometimes we take for granted such simple questions. Sometimes their meaning is so much more! This post is beautiful!!
Penbleth says
Beautiful Jessica, as always. Your words always move me with their truth and straightforwardness. God bless you.
Elena says
6 words that take my breath away. So beautiful, Jess.
Elena says
Sorry – I went and called you “Jess” and don’t even know if you like that. So, Jessica!
Jessica says
People call me Jess all the time. 🙂
Kate F. says
It is amazing how powerful six words can be.
Less IS definitely more.
Less is a powerful way to get a point across.
Less is amazing when you can feel the emotion behind it.
Thanks for continuing to inspire me and give me a reason to check my Google reader 😉
Jessica says
Awww, such a sweet comment, thank you!
Klz says
I’m sniffling.
Jessica says
Sorry! It\’s probably allergies. 🙂
angela says
Six little words with so much weight and meaning. And Hadley’s hand holding yours…unbelievably precious. Thank you, again, for giving us a glimpse into your beautiful heart.
Tina @ Life Without Pink says
Wow beautiful and touching. XOXOXO
By Word of Mouth Musings says
Such a way with words, especially when yours come straight from your heart.
Love always Jessica, always xxx
Jessica says
Love to you too! xo
Finding My New Normal says
Perfect! Especially how those words can be happy or sad, depending on the situation.
Jessica says
As soon as I read yours I knew I had to do mine, thank you for the inspiration.
XLMIC says
Simple. Perfect.
I’m crying. Thank you for filling my evening with such honest and exquisite feeling.
Jessica says
Sorry for the tears but thank you for reading.
Ilana says
That picture literally brought tears to my eyes. Lovely.
Jessica says
That was Hadley\’s hand grabbing mine after she was born. My most cherished picture.
Kimberly says
This is absolutely breathtaking. It gave me chills.
jane@flightplatformliving says
again heart rending, powerful writing. You always make me catch my breath and tear up when you write from the heart. much love x
Jessica says
Thank you Jane, means so much!
Crystal Theresa says
beautiful. ♥
tracy says
Perfectly done. You are so amazing. Love you.
RoryBore says
brilliantly and beautifully done.
Galit Breen says
Breathtaking Jessica, truly.
Stasha says
Speechless. You took my breath away.
Christine @ quasiagitato says
ditto.
Jessica says
This post gave me chills. Such a simple question but so much meaning and importance in it.
Danna says
Wow, such a beautiful, meaningful post. Thank you for sharing!